Thursday, November 5, 2009

Stupid Me Stupid You (Wow Its Bad) Comments

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Lying on the cold cement
Red surrounding me
Spots in front of my eyes
I think
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Nyl Revol
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Sydne Morris 05 November 2009

Wow. I love your rhyme scheme and just how you used repeating of vowels and constantants to express the pain in you. Awesome Job! ! ! !

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Infamous Ashley 05 November 2009

it was really good i was a little confused but im getting as i read it over and over and i really liked it

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