I really like this poem, but, what I absolutely hate about it is the format. I'm sorry, but you wrote an excellent poem, some spelling mistakes, but I'm sure you already caught them. Good effort. This poem has a nice rhyming feeling to it and is easy to understand.
God bless
On behalf of Jake,
Davke
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I really like this poem, but, what I absolutely hate about it is the format. I'm sorry, but you wrote an excellent poem, some spelling mistakes, but I'm sure you already caught them. Good effort. This poem has a nice rhyming feeling to it and is easy to understand. God bless On behalf of Jake, Davke