Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Stupid I Comments

Rating: 4.8

My stupid I,
do not know,
the sight of the
falling snow.
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Neela Nath Das
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Unnikrishnan E S 24 January 2021

The great lover of nature in the poet expresses herself forcefully in this lovely poem.5🌟

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 12 October 2017

Please don't ever tell lies to us, oh great lover of nature, you do not succeed here in proving that you can be that Idiot..in practice you see in a moment, much ahead and around than the present day idiots would ever, in their entire life. Thanks for the lovely tiny breed, a marvel of the art of poetry from you Sir. Missing you in this PH brotherhood over the months. Regards, Subhas

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Bri Edwards 07 July 2017

hey! Stupid U! perhaps you were busy with OTHER things? ? tell us about Smart Me. i'm sure there must be SOMETHING to tell there. One reason i enjoy sights of Nature is probably because one often does not have to go far OR spend money (or much money) to find and view a spider's web, a wispy cloud, a swallow swooping, or a flower budding. to MyPoemList. bri :) i read a comment you wrote somewhere else on PH.

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Neela Nath Das 12 July 2017

Thanks Bri.Yes, I'm busy but I'm writing poetry and short stories in my native language and learning French at the same time.Moreover, I am a service holder.Besides these I take care of my family like other Indians.

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Mountain Man 30 August 2016

A very good poem.....

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 January 2016

Nature's call! want to feel all, the sky, busy ants how the honey-bees, do flowers touch! t he depth of, unexplored sea. falling snow very good thoughts written well. thank u very much tony

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Lovely poem.....10 It is equally important To present it instant And come out Clean without fall out

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Subbaraman N V 10 May 2015

Wonderful thought! Magnificent expression. Congratulations.

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A beautiful poem which the poet tells about the nature and stupidity.

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Akhtar Jawad 21 June 2014

Nature exposes herself in many ways, but the man is often ignorant. But Neela is aware that is why she wrote this beautiful poem,

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Nurain Ali-balogun 30 November 2012

Extraordinary effort Nilakshi, very lovely poem.

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Hazel Durham 30 November 2012

Straight to the point, so true we should stand and watch, learn, admire nature's abundance! Great write!

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Indranil Bhaduri 30 November 2012

Amazing! One of the best poems I have ever read.

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Lyn Paul 30 November 2012

Amazing poem, beautifully written

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Asif Andalib 28 November 2012

God has created the nature so beautifully it amazes us if we observe it. The sky, the landscape, the rivers and seas, the animal kingdom everything is so perfect and awe-inspiring. But unfortunately sometimes we have no time to take a good look at it and appreciate its beauty. I enjoyed reading your beautiful write

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Valerie Dohren 28 November 2012

We are all guilty of not observing the beauties of nature around us, because we are so preoccupied with our daily lives of hustle and bustle. But at least we poets recognize this and are aware of nature even if we dont always take the time to look. We should take note of your lovely poem Nil.

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Kanav Justa 28 November 2012

my stupid i, , , , why i didnt read it before, , , great poem, , ,

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Payal Parande 28 November 2012

so wrong of you mam you can't be stupid cause you missed these things cause you didn't they are in you....you are also a beautiful natures creation and you proved it by this beautiful piece thank you love payal

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Neela Nath Das 28 November 2012

My dear Rachel, so sweet is your comment. I'm also among them, who ignore nature's beauty.I feel sometimes, now-a-days I forget to watch sparrows and their nestlings, the wild flowers which I used to see in my childhood days are meaningless to me now.So, I penned this poem. Thanks a lot for your wise comment.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 28 November 2012

Yes. So often we miss the Pure, Call of Nature and then feel for it. But for Heaven's sake don't you name your self stupid.For we know you are a true great poet. Thanks and best wishes, Chandra Thiagarajan

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