Alice has made a mess of everything
teeth clenching from the sting
she peeled back a scab
releasing the blood with a painful stab
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Regardless of any meaning this is just such a great piece. I love the flow and imagery. Esra Sloblock
She's not, she's not, she's not going mad Dyna, she can't be or she wouldn't know it! lol Great work. But, misguided rather than stupid I would say. Enjoying your work. Tai
A dark piece Dyna. Reminds me of the old Sisters of Mercy lyric 'Alice pressed against the wall so she can see the door, in case the laughing strangers call and crush the petals on the floor.' Evocative stuff. Grand.
Twisted. Sick. Dark. I loved it. -chuck