Saturday, July 15, 2006

Stupid Girl Comments

Rating: 4.8

Alice has made a mess of everything
teeth clenching from the sting
she peeled back a scab
releasing the blood with a painful stab
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Dyna Misery
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Chuck Audette 13 September 2006

Twisted. Sick. Dark. I loved it. -chuck

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Regardless of any meaning this is just such a great piece. I love the flow and imagery. Esra Sloblock

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***** ********* 15 July 2006

She's not, she's not, she's not going mad Dyna, she can't be or she wouldn't know it! lol Great work. But, misguided rather than stupid I would say. Enjoying your work. Tai

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Declan McHenry 15 July 2006

A dark piece Dyna. Reminds me of the old Sisters of Mercy lyric 'Alice pressed against the wall so she can see the door, in case the laughing strangers call and crush the petals on the floor.' Evocative stuff. Grand.

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