Tuesday, January 22, 2013

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Rating: 4.3

I'm pretty dumb but my muse is much brighter
It seems that the strangest of things can excite her
If she gets dusty I give her a shaking
But it was just flour from where she's been baking.
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Stevie Taite
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John Brown 04 February 2013

I like the sustitution of wines instead of whines... I presume this was intentional Stevie? Good poem.

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Valerie Dohren 24 January 2013

Your Muse does you proud Stevie - good to know what other people's Muses get up to! !

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Heather Wilson 23 January 2013

You do very well, I love reading your work, your muse must be shining very brightly, , Very few people (if any) can take on board all that goes on in this world, good, bad, (some very bad) , and indifferent.

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Nader Baheri 23 January 2013

the Muse expresses your tact in art.she would help all of us.wonderful written~nb

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Nader Baheri 23 January 2013

your Muse expresses your tact in art.i completely grab it.nice written~nb

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Kelvin Owusu 23 January 2013

this for me was interesting poem wasn't 100% sure what it was bout till read your notes, a good write

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Stevie Taite

Stevie Taite

Kent, England
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