Thursday, July 2, 2020

Stumbling Towards Desire Comments

Rating: 4.3

I stumble pajamaed, half asleep toward the object of my desire.
in memory, it calls to me, of passionate pleasures experienced prior.
The morning's night is the consummate time for secret rondeaus discrete.
With ninjaly sneak I arrive at the door - my illicit joy within reach.
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anais vionet
COMMENTS
Denis Mair 04 February 2023

Clown School 101: brightly lit visions of desire set us up for pratfalls time after time.

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Khairul Ahsan 10 March 2022

The desires may be secret, but their expression may not be so in pseudonym.

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Captain Cur 17 February 2021

A spymaster's pizza delight. But who was the villain that stole the pizza, I hope it was pepperoni!

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Chinedu Dike 04 August 2020

A concise and passionate bit of verse nicely crafted with artistic brilliance. Very powerfully and movingly penned.

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anais vionet 05 January 2021

I'm glad you liked it - but artistic brilliance might be stretching it - HA!

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Michael Burch 10 July 2020

Another very cute, very engaging poem. Very well done!

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anais vionet 05 January 2021

Thank you sir. =] =]

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Sandra Feldman 02 July 2020

So well written and so adorable! Put a welcomed smile on my face. Merci beaucoup, le final c'etais pas atendu!

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anais vionet 05 January 2021

don't ya love surprises

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The Muse 02 July 2020

Really funny poem. Well done.

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