Friday, August 21, 2015

Stumbled And Learned …… (1) Comments

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Knowing Your omnipresence
Thinking where to hide my crimes,

Endeavoring that exploration
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Amitava Sur
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Srabanti Guha 29 August 2015

So true and so perfectly it is depicted here! ! Yes, nothing can be hidden at last though we try and exercise the most.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 August 2015

Yes, the truth is always the truth. Nice piece of work.

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Amitava Sur 29 August 2015

Thank you for your valued comment.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 August 2015

Woah abstract and intriguing. Philosophical! In brevity too. Nice to read frm u again

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Amitava Sur 29 August 2015

Thank you to understand the truth behind.

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Savita Tyagi 23 August 2015

Great going with in. There is no place to hide from your true self. Acceptance sets us free. Thanks for sharing this beautiful thought.

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Amitava Sur 29 August 2015

I am thankful for your valued comment.

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Lyn Paul 22 August 2015

So beautifully penned.

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Amitava Sur 29 August 2015

Thank you Lyn.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 22 August 2015

Truly, God is present everywhere and knows everything. He knows what is hidden deep into our heart

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Amitava Sur 29 August 2015

Thanks for understanding the truth behind.

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Roseann Shawiak 22 August 2015

Yes, people are always trying to hide their crimes or wrong doing in life. Yet in the end finding and knowing that it is an impossibility for sure, because God is omnipresent! Very passive at first, then second part smacks you with the reality of what you have done wrong, and knowing you cannot hide it at all. Excellent poem, Amitava! Very substantial meaning within it! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Amitava Sur 29 August 2015

Thank you RoseAnn for understanding the truth what i wanted to say in this micro poem

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