Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Stuffed Toy! Comments

Rating: 4.4

He gruffed at me, and
scoffed at me
my stuffed toy!
it took centuries to make him
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Shahzia Batool
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Passionate Reader 28 August 2013

A compact metaphorical poem! ! ! so symbolic suggesting great concern for the one you created once! ! ! loved it :)))

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Queeny Gona 21 August 2013

In the Robitic era, we seek the joy, take out pressure with our own hand made toys! Personifying them to be our real soulmates. Great write dear Ma'am. Rated 10++

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Chandana Khan 10 August 2013

stuffed toys are one's best friends, for sharing, fighting and company.

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Heather Wilkins 08 August 2013

it took centuries to make him with all soft stuff inside with my own hands. nice

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Sallam Yassin 08 August 2013

in sentimental things of heart every thing is more than what he was deep and sweet are affairs of the heart/ well done

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Poet's Fan 08 August 2013

if this is the feeling for a 'toy', am just toying with the thought, , how humane is the poetess for humanbeings, a short poem that speaks a volume of the heart stuffed with sensitivity.

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Wahab Abdul 07 August 2013

a very ignificant poem with all its metaphorical meanings... i love it...10... aw

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Ramesh Rai 07 August 2013

it does express pains of any one. a poetry is ebriched when it expresses pains or pleasure of any one. toys are made in several kind. its breaking is a matter of grief wht so ever be the reason but love for that toy is never erased. beautiful melancholic write.

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 August 2013

Beautiful poem..It took centuries to make him...Beautiful write.Loved it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 August 2013

It took centuries to make him Great effort and how time expands when carefully making a stuffed toy. And the concern for the lost toy which gets a new life and maybe hungry. Beautiful poem.

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