Wednesday, April 29, 2009

(stuff And Nonsense) You Are Old, Mrs Windle (With Apologies To Lewis Carroll) Comments

Rating: 2.9

You are old, Mrs. Windle, the schoolchildren cried,
and you really are not very cool.
Yet you write and you paint and you teach on the side -
do you think that you should be in school?
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Paul Hansford 29 June 2009

The first of your poems I have read, and what a standard it sets! No need to apologise to Carroll - he'd be flattered at the imitation. This is spectacular.

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Onelia Avelar 23 May 2009

The teacher's profession is one of the most challenging, arduous professions. One has to be at the same time a clown, an artist, a walking encyclopedia, attractive and not too attractive and calm like a cathedral! Those who never tried it do not know what it is. Those who survive in it deserve great respect. Wonderful poem Jan, laughter can keeps us always on the surface of the deep water :) You are not old as far as I know you, I would not say it yet.

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C Richard Miles 14 May 2009

Loved this one, Jan - what on earth do the younger generation think of us old fuddy duddies? Though perhaps we're not as fuddy-duddy as they think!

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Kesav Easwaran 30 April 2009

Brilliant poem Janice...exhilarating stuff! My smile only broadened as and when i read your piece stanza by stanza down...how nicely you agree to disagree there! Top class write...10+

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