Thursday, April 19, 2007
Student’s Night Comments
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There was fighting on the dance floor
And Converse on my feet,
The place it smelled of beer and sweat,
But the music sounded so sweet,
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Charlie F. Kane
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8/10/2025 10:37:02 AM # 1.0.0
A very well constructed poem. I enjoy the juxtaposition between the somewhat lively and hectic experiences of the dance floor compared with the silent and placid night. I also enjoy the use of the word ‘fractured’ in the third stanza almost allowing the night and the noise to be broken in the last two stanzas.