Saturday, November 7, 2015

Stuck In My Heart Comments

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This moment alone,
The thought still new and fresh,
Fulfilling, I must say,
To get frozen in just this moment’s hush,
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Chinedu Dike 27 November 2015

Loss of fascination in bliss of love is well depicted in the poem. Love is a spiritual experience that affects one profoundly, it's whimsical and temperamental, appearing unannounced and may leave without warning, if it's not carefully nurtured at all-time to maintain its bliss. Indeed, it's best to discard the unpleasant moments and hold on to happy ones. Thanks for sharing Ian. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Fabrizio Frosini 07 November 2015

a love song, but a sadness stays inside.. thanks for sharing, Ian.. and keep on writing

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Kelly Kurt 07 November 2015

A relatable poem, well written. Thanks, Ian

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