Wednesday, November 30, 2005

Stuck Between Your Soul And Reality Comments

Rating: 5.0

you must understand
I didn't want to leave
not now
not like this
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Simon Whild 30 November 2005

Lovely imagery here. I loved these lines: what you'd have done with me? put me in your pocket? to finger me idly while folks paused to gape at your sorrow with a smile.

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