Monday, July 31, 2017

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Pursue those dreams to feel alive,
Where have i lost them in the race,
Never did i pause all through my way,
Winding path did take me long,
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Ashika Murali Acharya
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Chinedu Dike 12 March 2018

Where there is no dream, stagnation and despair reign supreme. A beautiful creation set aside for sober reflection. Thanks for sharing Ashika.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 February 2018

To feel alive! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 21 February 2018

Pursue the dreams that have been lost..Great poem

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Ashika Murali Acharya 23 February 2018

Thank you.

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 November 2017

Hi Ashika, A very positive poem, full of energy.. Your exhortation: : : : Pursue those dreams to feel alive, : : an advice everyone should try to follow. And : : Now it's time to chase them back, To feel alive is a dream again, : : even when you are : : Squarely stuck in the circle of life.: : You strike the nail right on its head... A 100+++

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Ashika 15 November 2017

Thank you once again.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2017

We see many dreams a day and we think to fulfill dreams. Perusing dreams we feel alive. Winding path takes the moment of joy and journey long. Squarely stuck in the circle of life amazes mind and brings life ahead to feel importance of dreams. Interesting drafting is beautifully presented../.10

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Thank you for your encouragement!

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