You know Girl,
I was dying this morning,
I bet you didn’t know,
I was too busy cracking jokes,
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I was really inside this one Anies. I love a poem that conceals a huge situation or truth in the smallest moment. The details are vivid and I realy enjoyed reading this.
It's beautiful, you really reveal your insides, that's why I keep returning to your poems and comment on practically every one I read. I hope your reaching out with your poems is also part of your healing from the being caught in the vacant materialism etc all around you. Do you take creative writing and literature courses? Or no time? Anyway, you have a spirit that is definitely finding its voice, and such a voice is a pair of wings!