Friday, June 20, 2014

Struggling With What I Did Comments

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What would you do
If I told you I screwed up?
What would you say
If I asked for a second chance?
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cassie slaughter
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Tim Kitchin 21 June 2014

A universal theme, I guess. I'm not totally sure this is poetry, but the measured pace of the lines creates great tension and a sense of repression. Nice work!

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