Thursday, October 26, 2017

Struggles Comments

Rating: 5.0

The pain cuts deep, deeper than a knife
My mind has been muddled for so long I don't know what's real
I lost my way and I'm forced to fake a smile through the strife
I'm ashamed of my life because its empty
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D.A. Woods 04 January 2024

This is unfortunate you had move to hold or live you. I'm so disappointed you're alone feeling this way. Someone on here take care of her as she has nobody to turn to! ! 😞

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Lisa T 27 October 2017

Thank you

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2017

The pain cuts deeper than a knife and this provokes thought. Struggle will end with end of night. Light will bring smile. Brilliant poem this is...10

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