The sun set and it was being dark,
A pitch dark night had fallen,
No light was there nor any spark,
A star shone at all of sudden,
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Wow. What a very fascinating tale, so pointedly concluded with the answer. La, intriguing, fascinating, enjoyable. Very interesting. A very serious admonition, depicted metaphorically by the night sky. Excellent! Marvelous. Well-expressed. Deadly, in a sense. I like it.
The good and bad was written in such poetic way and the images was so large to emphasis the reality of kindness, selfishness and forgiveness. Excellent poem with deep meaning. 10
Nice poem. The message is very relevant and rational. Good texture and vivid imagery. A captivating write. Thanks for sharing.
a dazzling delight of lines, created the master piece of a poet... a struggle of life in the presence of Light and Hope...thank you for sharing this wonderful poem...God bless 10/10