Thursday, October 17, 2013

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Long ago
and far away,
at the dawn
of days,
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Smoky Hoss
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Sara Fielder 01 November 2013

Smoky, this is truly masterful. It has such depth and truth to it's message. We fall down and we get back up and with His help we are able to overcome the struggles that we encounter in our journey. Peace.

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Babatunde Aremu 31 October 2013

A wonderful spirit filled poem. I am blessed with this. Kudos, brother

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Babatunde Aremu 31 October 2013

A wonderful spirit filled poem. I am blessed with this. Kudos, brother

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Joseph Anderson 26 October 2013

A deep, somber ethereal and solemn presentation. Perhaps we all struggle our Gods. Very serious thinking herein. Let us hope that the light don't fail us-10

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Dave Walker 25 October 2013

A great poem, we do struggle with god mostly in our younger days. A great write.

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Noreen Carden 20 October 2013

Hello Smoky my god your way with words astounds me.that last line is beyond beautiful well done

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