Thursday, April 2, 2009

Struggle To Be Read Comments

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Oh how we try to figure out,
this struggle to be read.
As we sit and scribble down,
the thoughts from out' our heads.
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Heath Gunn
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Patti Masterman 29 July 2009

I like introspective poetry. It also serves as a gentle reminder that we do make a choice; we make choices every day, all day long, and the words we write upon another's efforts should be as well considered as anything we would write for ourselves (or want written upon our own poem children) .

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Christine Kerr 03 April 2009

Beautifully said Heath, We can get our self into a vicious circle or coast for a while. Fast or slow, however it happens, were all looking for the same thing one time or another. Nicely put and a great save, Thankyou for your input.

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Heath Gunn

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