Sunday, March 16, 2008

Struggle & Surrender Comments

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Pale and slender, the new moon is rising.
Petals and perfumes are plumes of delight.
A nectarous moisture slips through the seam
shining soft like the silken dews of night.
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Linda Marie Van Tassell
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Absolutely stunning work here, Linda Marie.Full-spectrumed imagework pours from all thirteen stanzas...Smooth, mellifluous structural employment enables the reader to ensconce themselves into a fluxed, eye-friendly read.Solid Crafting! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Linda Marie Van Tassell

Linda Marie Van Tassell

Lynchburg, Virginia
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