I'm fighting & I'm losing,
trying my best to be strong.
I'm falling & I'm failing,
being proven that I'm wrong.
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Well-written poem of the everyday stuggle Bravo! I feel the same in this year's stuggle
A melancholy poem. Oozing pessimism. But we should remember that a little child learns to walk, falling down a hundred times. So we have to retain our optimism.
Well articuated and nicely penned with clarity of thought and mind. A beautiful poem nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm....
Excellently written 5 Stars full!