Structured Existence Comments

I really liked the 'I am a tree of life' symbology. The poem is profound. Thanks.

A great deal of insight here, hard won and authentic. That 'discontented part' of us is where poems begin, I think. It gets to the point where we have to concede our need to know the reason for everything, and just live our daily lives the way the other creatures on this earth do. Good poem.

A fabulous look on what I often title in my head... 'Go Figure'... you've made the summation well.. Thank you