Sunday, August 13, 2017

Structure Comments

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Forming structure in one's life
Is the most essential thing.
Without it, life will waver to and fro.
It's as a ship with out direction
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Jeanette Telusma
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Edward Kofi Louis 16 August 2017

A vision of what's important! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Jeanette Telusma 25 August 2017

That's right, Edward. Thanks for commenting.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 August 2017

Structure means to a set of rules defining behaviour or to arrange. If this one will be absent in life then the life will be like a vehicle without brake or as per your depiction... Forming structure in one's life Is the most essential thing. Without it, life will waver to and fro. It's as a ship with out direction Going forth as the wind blows. It's as having no direction. This poem is yours best poem and didactive in nature.

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Jeanette Telusma 15 August 2017

Wow... I thank you so much for your kind comment, Mr. Kumarmani. I am so appreciative of you.

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Ester Wallis 13 August 2017

A poem that we all should read.

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Jeanette Telusma 15 August 2017

Yes and thank you so much, Ester. Stay blessed.

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Rini Shibu 13 August 2017

Well penned.. Set goal and to achieve it. Thanks jeanette

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Jeanette Telusma 15 August 2017

Hi, Rini... so kind of you to comment. Thank you so much.

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