Wednesday, November 21, 2018

Struck By Lightning (Fibonacci Sequence) Comments

Rating: 5.0

sudden
sharp
sapphire eyes
struck by lightning
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Valsa George 21 November 2018

Great revival of love! I understand that a spark is about to grow into a conflagration of love! Great write Mihaela!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 November 2018

the flesh is warm against the volcanic crater once carbonised by love's fire terra cotta static tacit emotional fire survives....so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem poem so nicely executed.10

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M Asim Nehal 21 November 2018

Superb! ! ! I am happy after being struck by the lightning he/she finally survived.....And I liked the format (Fibonacci Sequence) Full marks.

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