Thursday, March 22, 2007

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A solitary soar, a lonely glide,
I search myself for a place to hide.
The truth tumbles all around,
reality smashing my tower of dreams down.
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David Daykin
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Michelle Tiddy 26 March 2007

Great poem David. But, you are lucky if, once the love has gone, you still can be friends... Very nice writing. M.

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Jackelin J. Jarvis 23 March 2007

Aw, how sad...but what a GREAT poem!

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David Daykin

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