Believing in
more of who
I am today
than yesterday.
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"Believing in more of who I am today than yesterday." I like Evelyn comment on this "dance of life"! 5*****
There is such beauty in your portrayal of this dance of life. A superb creation!
A poem of immense depth. Exudes positive energy and a vision about self emancipation. Loved it. Full score.
Hey Lisa, Went to your site...it looks really cool. I do believe I might give it a go! I can see where a lot of work has gone into it! Theodora Onken.
Its just me, Lisa. You wrote me way back in late feb or march on another poetry site...poetrybox...you had asked me then to join you at some site, and i never did...good to see you here...and I love your poem...kinda sounds like my life...great to see you, and read your poetry! Theodora Onken
'I now see hints of sun where there is rain.' This is a very beautiful poem.