Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, November 13, 2014

Strong Union Comments

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I shall need you at each turn
To burn
My ill desires
As I want to prove no liar
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 November 2014

welcome Ade Caparas Manilah, Tista Chatterjee and Charu Jain like thi Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2014

nice Sai Krishna2 hours ago nice Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2014

Well composed. We need partner in life....! Devendra Bajgai1 hour ago The message is great but the need to correct the spelling and syntactical lapses..! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2014

Not bad Billy Loving1 hour ago Good effort - the last stanza could use some work- a little raw

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Heather Wilkins 13 November 2014

we have strong union and you as best companion I shall be lucky and pray always to almighty a lovely write about marriage

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 November 2014

I shall need you at each turn To burn My ill desires As I want to prove no liar

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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