I shall need you at each turn
To burn
My ill desires
As I want to prove no liar
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Well composed. We need partner in life....! Devendra Bajgai1 hour ago The message is great but the need to correct the spelling and syntactical lapses..! Comment +1
Not bad Billy Loving1 hour ago Good effort - the last stanza could use some work- a little raw
we have strong union and you as best companion I shall be lucky and pray always to almighty a lovely write about marriage
I shall need you at each turn To burn My ill desires As I want to prove no liar
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