You will never see the real tears.
You will only see me strong and brave
I will never break down in front of you
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being strong minded is a good thing but it can lead to sadness eventually until you let it out or open up to someone, Good job on this poem its hard to be strong minded and its easy to let it out, Keep that in mind.
its good but it is too....general....you should improve and try to rectify your low points....keep it up!