Saturday, September 27, 2008

Strong Enough Comments

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The river coming up to suffocate me.
The smoke filling up my lungs to drown me.
And then a breath of new air.
Not untainted,
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Aimee Nell
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James Timothy Jarrett 27 September 2008

I love it. Short and to the point, yet powerful. I have been in the river.

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