Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, April 22, 2014

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I thought of writing
With intention of igniting
The compassion and feeling
For those who need some filling
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

welcome khushi raaj 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

Nice. KR BALAKRISHNAN12 hours ago Mehtajii...your poems always have a human touch.Keep it up.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

The rythym is perfect. Nicholas Pietrowski12 hours ago very good. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

Good write. John Ravenscroft12 hours ago Be you struck with any handicap, or disability, illiterate or homeless, rich or poor whatever walk of life, no matter what extreme, EVERYONE has something to contribute. Look past the typo errors, and look at the beauty of the poem that's written, but don't look past the disability in someone, it is their characterisation of self, and we are richer for their journey of discovery, and more love to be aware.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

welcome ajamal vankar 3 secs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

Rosemarie Tan Valmores likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome 2 secs · Unlike · 1

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Connie Yost 22 April 2014

Written with compassion and deep feeling- -a very moving poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 April 2014

I thought of writing With intention of igniting

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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