Stroke Comments

Brilliantly presented and a profound poem.........

This poem is great- like so many other ones you have written. Oh how many fronts can one fight a battle (once-within and without at the same time) . Somehow, I think this poem sounds cruel at the end. I Have not been on here in years. You are most talented. Michele

Intimate observations made on the effect of stroke Vince. and so delicately balanced with well chosen phrases - - 'like a lion felled' is one which says so succinctly just how it can look - - another fine write.....10 + ++ Fay

I think this has brilliant use of words, i really enjoyed it. Thankyou.