Tuesday, February 21, 2012

Strobe Insomnia Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clenched gatherings of black leathery wings
agitating against my breast
snittering and brushing close
As night stretches itself
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Martin O'Neill
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Brian Jani 22 May 2014

Strobe insomnia , wow! ! !

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Brian Jani 22 May 2014

Strobe insomnia , wow! ! !

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Patti Masterman 02 March 2012

I like what you did here, and the strobe effect also makes me think of the way life grinds us down, one bright light, one missile at a time, the sticks stones and arrows of daily life, until we're completely worn down, red eyed..nice.

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Valerie Dohren 02 March 2012

Very descriptive - insomnia is my bugbear! ! !

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Martin O'Neill

Martin O'Neill

Solihull, Birmingham, England
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