Friday, September 11, 2015

Striving Toward Perfection Comments

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Steady struggle with sin
Becomes big battlefield;
To emerge so victorious,
Preparation must be fulfilled.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2020

Loved your earnest call to strive towards perfection. I found the poem very inspiring. 'Firm faith is your shield, Stopping the fiery arrows; They're aimed at you by satan To bring burning sorrows.' - Loved this stanza particularly.

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Avid Fan 01 May 2019

Steady struggle with sin Becomes big battlefield; To emerge so victorious, Preparation must be fulfilled. An uplifting spiritual poem, sir Bernard.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 November 2017

Perfection! ! ! To reach the ultimate goal! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 November 2017

Thanks, Edward....I’m so glad and grateful👍👍👍

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