Wednesday, December 12, 2007
Striving For Rain Comments
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I wake up with the thought of him again
Racing through every pathway in my head
Anxious just to see him again
Maybe today he'll smile again
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Sam Burton
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7/25/2025 3:09:19 PM # 1.0.0
I like your choice of saying 'loose the rain' instead of 'loosening the rain.' It flows well and sounds also like 'lose the rain'-a whole different interpretation. And then you give it a perfect resolution in the last line with 'seize the rain.' Nicely done poem.