A small fine cut, and a dropp of tear,
Your faint, weak wail, brings her so near.
When the veil of darkness, falls on your eyes,
And you can hear your heart's deepest fears and cries,
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her love grows in this heart like a seed that his memory is filled with her so many years later each rustle of a leaf, his call to her
This beautiful ode on LOVE is so true and honest.... You have absolutely chiselled the piece with words and imagery which go so well for those emotions. A complete 10 deservedly for that thoughtful moment.