Sunday, November 6, 2011

Strings Of Freedom Comments

Rating: 5.0

walk with me..
you and me, not separate
our poem is totality
and our poetry,
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ahmed khaled
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Karen Degnan-foiles 23 January 2013

Loved it, loved the flow, loved th expression of freedom of the soul and of the mind...

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Alicia Meyers 11 January 2012

Really fantastic. :) Love it.

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Kseniya (Xeny) Rundel 06 January 2012

Poets of the Earth, unite in the poorest poetic language of the world!))) Nice poem, clear and short. Google translates it without any problem!))) Let it be our anthem! Let it get 10!

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Ronik Spartan 07 December 2011

may i have to read it twice..but really it's a masterpiece a real way to show the desire to write... :))

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Alex Kult 02 December 2011

this really is an amazing poem. sorry i didnt get to it sooner, been held up and havent been on in a while. but truly, youre a great poet, keep up the good work. youll go far =)

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 November 2011

Very well written......and majestic write..

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 November 2011

Poetic melodrama walking the scouts to the tunes of guitar as the strings lack drums broken by the seasons of separation.Now is the time of Freiheit...now is emancipation to be robbed from the strings which robbed so far the slumber...Majestic write and hope all will walk like Egyptians.....

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Unwritten Soul 10 November 2011

Beautiful and I never misunderstood your nice words...Ahmed, we'll be your shoes to follow your steps and walk with you...as you step on the ground we also print the sand, together we walk as our breathes unite, so wear your heart with your soul, wear your paper with ink and we will flow together with you in art melody called poetry :) _Unwritten Soul

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Richard McClellan 07 November 2011

Yea, I agree with Sally, it needs focus! You should refine it at a later date after some time as went by... Good poem though...

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Sally Plumb Plumb 07 November 2011

Nice piece... although I didn't understand it all.

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Ahmed Khaled 07 November 2011

we must work as one person to spread love, freedom, peace and humanity for all humanity.i love you all poemhunter poets and i love poemhunter.warm love for you.

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Crimson Love 07 November 2011

Beautiful poem, truly a splendid write!

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Ency Bearis 07 November 2011

great piece, lovely lyrical poem

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hdhd dudjf 07 November 2011

true freedom lies beyond death...before that it is all illusion.

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Jacqui Broad 07 November 2011

Life is a song. And as poets we provide the rhythm, spirit. Cry with us when we are sad. Laugh with us when we are happy. Love with us when we are in love. We are the poets, and we will provide the music people wants to hear. And we'll touch their heart's strings with the perfect melody... Great poem!

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(De Va) 06 November 2011

beautiful write, and it expresses an opinion of equality, I like that. Thanks for the share

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Matt Mooney 06 November 2011

I think this free flowing poem is saying how free we are in Poemhunter to be poets to one another-a true brotherhood and sisterhood.10.

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Well i seem to get the message, from this piece. nice

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Well i seem to get the message, from this piece. nice

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Leonard Dabydeen 06 November 2011

Lovely poem. Heart-felt appeal to join forces with poets and their poetry...creating ' strings of freedom '.

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