Wednesday, December 9, 2015

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We follow the same pace
Same path
Of father, grandfather
Forefathers been
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Asif Baloch
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Edward Kofi Louis 09 December 2015

Slaves of desires! With the ways of life; but, we can surely change along the line. Nice work.

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Aijaz Asif 12 December 2015

Thank you for like and such beautiful comment Edward Kofi Louis :)

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M Asim Nehal 09 December 2015

This is what every powerful nation and its people think about others and why powerful, every one is after it and it is one of the major cause of conflict....Thought provoking poem.10

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Aijaz Asif 12 December 2015

Indeed and thanks for such inspiring comment and like Mohammed Asim Nehal :)

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