Wednesday, July 29, 2020

String Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dancing dewdrop on the leave,
Through the prism of the first sunshine
The sweet notes of cuckoo and lyre
And the drifting water from the waterfall
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M. Asim Nehal
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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2020

We feel sweet cuckoo's tender note in this brilliant and excellent poem. You have nicely and interestingly penned this poem.

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The dancing dewdrop on the leave, Through the prism of the first sunshine The sweet notes of cuckoo and lyre And the drifting water from the waterfall Wonderful nature dancing in delight.......10

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Zuzu Mutairi 30 July 2020

Introspection needed, if it doesn't touch your heartstrings

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Mamta S 29 July 2020

Thought provoking poem. Introspection is very much needed for those who fail to hear all sounds

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* Sunprincess * 29 July 2020

Winderful poem. Nicely written.

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Juhaina Tumlu 29 July 2020

You need heart to listen to the nature's song. lovely imagery in your poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 July 2020

Introspection is needed in each aspect of life with beauty of motivation. You have nicely perceived natural happenings. Dew drop amazingly dances on leaves. Cuckoo sings and trees express glee. An interesting poem is very brilliantly penned....10

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Kostas Lagos 29 July 2020

How can anyone be untouched by this beauty? Wonderful poem

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Michael Jack 29 July 2020

Yes Introspection needed, if it doesn't touch your heartstrings. Only heartless will not hear those beautiful sounds of nature give free of charge. Loved the way you put it.

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Sharad Bhatia 29 July 2020

It's a lovely feeling about nature, love. Thankyou very much for sharing such a beautiful poem. Rated10++

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Sharad bhatia 29 July 2020

Dur, Very nice poem. Thanks for sharing

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Bharati Nayak 29 July 2020

The scream of eagle echoing through the valley The quack of the duck rippling in the pond The gobble of the turkey in the meadow Introspection needed, if it doesn't touch your heartstrings- Nature is full of beauty.We have to have an eye to see them.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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