Monday, June 10, 2019

Strikingly Beautiful Comments

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it was a strikingly strange day! it rained pitter patter in the morning, it rained drip drop in the afternoon, but it did not rain at all in between!

ruby-red sun was up, mellifluous birds started chirping, I felt I could rest in warmth of the magnificent sun, and watch my demure white jasmine. it looked so elegant like a ravishing bride, waiting with beating heart for her beloved to arrive. pretty bridesmaids were the frolicking tulips in gorgeous red and yellow outfit.
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
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Savita Tyagi 28 July 2019

Lovely poem. Brings the memories of these kind of days alive. We just wonder on those days where did the clouds disappear in between rains.

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Thank you, Savita. A beautiful observation!

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2019

In between! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Thanks, Dear Poet. It's my great pleasure to share!

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Anil Kumar Panda 10 June 2019

A very beautiful poem. The flow of lines is amazing. 'Strange day but perfect day'.. is very well said. Thanks for sharing.

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So glad you liked the poem! Really appreciate your comments!

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