A bush lark in the Greenwood forest sings.
She sings all day long near the mountain springs.
Is she trilling in notes so plaintive of her missing mate?
Unleashing her heart of its doleful weight?
...
Read full text
From the covert of dark leaves, her song percolates and we feel the beauty of expression of this excellently penned poem. Greenwood forest sings and we feel it. An excellent sharing is done really.10
A bush lark in the Greenwood forest sings. She sings all day long near the mountain springs. Is she trilling in notes so plaintive of her missing mate? Unleashing her heart of its doleful weight? ........fantastic beginning with melancholy in touching expression. The feelings of a bush lark is impressively penned. A beautiful poem shared.
I felt a sadness reading your poem. The lark singing so beautifully reflecting a stricken heart and that song resonating within ones own aching heart. A superb write.
From the covert of dark leaves, her song percolates. Through the sinews of my heart it permeates, Striking a chord between two souls equally deprived, Stirring in me an inarticulate ache, never once divulged. An impressive poem.
The unfulfilled desire's song. Beautifully woven with emotion and mood. Loved. Merry Christmas, and happy new year to you and your family.
Well crafted in its own way this poem strikes many cords among the throngs of ones without that magic wand to order thoughts to fall in line.... A poem that can have a second phase of theme to happen soon!
This pull me a strong chord to say, Awesome...the song was cruel to reader because it's like read us secretly hahhahaa joking! I loved it_Soul
Aww, dear friend this brought tears to my eyes. A finest write! A connection that sparked a song to enchant every corner of my heart, thank you dear Valsa!
Striking a chord between you two souls the bush lark and your self in the form of this wonderful poem is very touching.The content of the poem and the write in such rhyming words echos as music.Kudos.
a dice(in word) lovable for lovers she trilling in notes so plaintive of her missing mate? Unleashing her heart of its doleful weight?
A deeply touching and poignant write. Sometimes the lovely songs from nature can touch the core of our heart making us feel we are connected with their world. A beautifully crafted poem with great imagery. So mellifluous when read. Five Stars! ! !