Sunday, December 9, 2012

Striking A Chord Comments

Rating: 5.0

A bush lark in the Greenwood forest sings.
She sings all day long near the mountain springs.
Is she trilling in notes so plaintive of her missing mate?
Unleashing her heart of its doleful weight?
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Valsa George
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 October 2020

A deeply touching and poignant write. Sometimes the lovely songs from nature can touch the core of our heart making us feel we are connected with their world. A beautifully crafted poem with great imagery. So mellifluous when read. Five Stars! ! !

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Anjandev Roy 19 November 2019

Superb.......Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 February 2019

From the covert of dark leaves, her song percolates and we feel the beauty of expression of this excellently penned poem. Greenwood forest sings and we feel it. An excellent sharing is done really.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 May 2018

A bush lark in the Greenwood forest sings. She sings all day long near the mountain springs. Is she trilling in notes so plaintive of her missing mate? Unleashing her heart of its doleful weight? ........fantastic beginning with melancholy in touching expression. The feelings of a bush lark is impressively penned. A beautiful poem shared.

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Simone Inez Harriman 07 July 2017

I felt a sadness reading your poem. The lark singing so beautifully reflecting a stricken heart and that song resonating within ones own aching heart. A superb write.

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Akhtar Jawad 28 May 2015

From the covert of dark leaves, her song percolates. Through the sinews of my heart it permeates, Striking a chord between two souls equally deprived, Stirring in me an inarticulate ache, never once divulged. An impressive poem.

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Neela Nath Das 24 December 2012

The unfulfilled desire's song. Beautifully woven with emotion and mood. Loved. Merry Christmas, and happy new year to you and your family.

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Well crafted in its own way this poem strikes many cords among the throngs of ones without that magic wand to order thoughts to fall in line.... A poem that can have a second phase of theme to happen soon!

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Unwritten Soul 16 December 2012

This pull me a strong chord to say, Awesome...the song was cruel to reader because it's like read us secretly hahhahaa joking! I loved it_Soul

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Elena Sandu 16 December 2012

Aww, dear friend this brought tears to my eyes. A finest write! A connection that sparked a song to enchant every corner of my heart, thank you dear Valsa!

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Vipins Puthooran 11 December 2012

perfect rhythm and rhyme/ an excellent poem! ! ! !

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Chandra Thiagarajan 09 December 2012

Striking a chord between you two souls the bush lark and your self in the form of this wonderful poem is very touching.The content of the poem and the write in such rhyming words echos as music.Kudos.

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Kee Thampi 09 December 2012

a dice(in word) lovable for lovers she trilling in notes so plaintive of her missing mate? Unleashing her heart of its doleful weight?

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