Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Monday, July 20, 2015

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I am not helpless or destitute
Who shall dance to your flue?
I shall change whole scene
That might have never witnessed or seen
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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welcome Ramesh Rai, Sunil Algama, Shamenaz Shaikh Like · Reply · 1 min ordan...See More Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just

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Hasmukh Mehta welcome shyama roy n ثائر لطفي Works at Amman, Phyllis Jordan...See More Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just

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no it is flute only for instumental voice

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Cindy Harrington Gunter likes this. Hasmukh Mehta wwelcome Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Kim Barney 20 July 2015

In the second line, did you mean FLUTE instead of FLUE? That would rhyme with destitute in line one, and also would make a lot more sense, at least to me.

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Kim Barney 20 July 2015

Interesting poem and fascinating illustration. Thanks for sharing.

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The way you like! We shall strike at our will

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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