Friday, October 1, 2021

Stride With The Wind Comments

Rating: 4.8

Do not act like
A horse with a bridle
Move as the cirrus clouds
Make their way across
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Rebecca Navarre 26 November 2022

Such beautiful heart and feeling expressed in this! .. Again Beyond #ing! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 26 November 2022

Of such beautiful heart and spirit striding with the wind! ..

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 November 2022

A brilliant poem that conveys sound advice. Well penned!

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Indira Renganathan 19 October 2021

Wisdom words with a good advice.....lovely....many stars

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Rebecca Navarre 18 October 2021

Beautifully deep imagery! .. With powerfully beautiful thoughts! .. Awesome! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Susan Williams 17 October 2021

oh, and a well-deserved 5-star rating

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Susan Williams 17 October 2021

I love the comparison with a horse with a bit in his mouth---a well-selected simile, my dear friend! I see that sky throiugh the gaze of your eyes

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Yes, man has to go ahead freely like an unbridled horse or like a cloud

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Kostas Lagos 04 October 2021

Splendid poem! A touch of freedom

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 October 2021

Absolute powerful poem so very true! A brevity full of wise words, great wisdom lies in here, we must read this poem in all ease and greatest peace we will overcome.5 Stars full on Top, dear great Poetess!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 03 October 2021

Wisdom and serenity emanate from this beautifully written verse.5 stars.

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Soran M. H 03 October 2021

Our beloved poet, our nature lover poet; refreshing our soul with renewable amazing imagery to send her unique and strong message into our mind, well done 5 Stars as usual

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Soran M. H 03 October 2021

Roam like the wild animals In the deep forest And stride With the wind.

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Anjandev Roy 02 October 2021

Another brilliant work.....with a significant message....thank u...

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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