Strictly Wicked Comments

and we bared with us no trinkets..........i'd say bore. and Bare means naked, but to bear is to carry something. [thanks, Google] Being a 'dirty old man', i enjoyed: our minds raced to distant vistas to taste sweat waters... or their daughters :) .........to loose my head, or give one............maybe lose my head? I 'love' the alliterations: in wicked gardens... without kind wardens ..........Land ho! bri :)

Youth is an age for adventure, and the expenditure of much grace. A well-conceived and excellently constructed piece; it conveyed me back to a time when my nerve was greater than my discernment. Bravo, good poet!