Friday, October 5, 2012

Strictly Business (2) Comments

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Took a business (?) trip to the French Sudan
Hoping while there to acquire a tan.
My Girl Friday came along to take a note
When my wife found out, that was all she wrote
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George Hunter
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George F. Hunter 05 October 2012

This poem had been deleted as I had offended someone by using the nasty word -. I can't tell you what the word was as then this comment would be deleted also. - doesn't actually mean poo when used in this context, it means stuff. But I guess most intelligent people know that. Anyhoo, I changed the word and resubmitted. Rules are rules and must be blindly obeyed. (Saying The excrement hit the fan just doesn't cut it [too many syllables]. Enjoy!

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