Strict Neutrality Comments

Good verse! George Collett5 minutes ago This one has a great message! The issue here is with the flow or cadence of the poem! It does not flow as well as it could! A bit of work makes this very good poem into a great poem! Keep up the good work Oh Bard! You have poetic skill! Comment +1 ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Unbreakable Lucas13 minutes ago I like that one

It is matter of strict neutrality Not to underestimate one’s own capacity It is gift from nature That we are human being of future