Thursday, September 22, 2005

Stress Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart bleeds
Yet I cant shed a tear
No matter what I'm going through
I feel the tears that are falling from my heart
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Ashley Olson
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Kris F 30 September 2005

Ashley, When I read this poem it really hit me hard because it feels like it is all about me. Honeslty I though you were in my head and taking my thoughs and doing what I do starange and odd in many ways. But I really liked it. We Shouldnt have to feel this pain that we hold even though I dont know how much pain you are holding. This poem seemed to really hit me as a poem that I really connected to. I write poems also. I think it is a good way to express my-self I hope you keep it up. Alright. -Kris-

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Ashley Olson

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