Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, December 4, 2013

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“I knew you were for me”
She spoke gently as if totally free
From shock she had suffered
And almost sunk with opinion differed
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 December 2013

Imagery is there Fred Lassonde2 minutes ago Nice Comment +1 solid poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 December 2013

Garrick Hennessy3 minutes ago a few basic errors (or is the lack of articles intentional?) clearly a piece of writing filled with emotion. Not really my personal cuppa but a popular cuppa nonetheless. With some editing, it could go from solid to very good.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 December 2013

“I knew you were for me” She spoke gently as if totally free

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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