“I knew you were for me”
She spoke gently as if totally free
From shock she had suffered
And almost sunk with opinion differed
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Garrick Hennessy3 minutes ago a few basic errors (or is the lack of articles intentional?) clearly a piece of writing filled with emotion. Not really my personal cuppa but a popular cuppa nonetheless. With some editing, it could go from solid to very good.
“I knew you were for me” She spoke gently as if totally free
Imagery is there Fred Lassonde2 minutes ago Nice Comment +1 solid poem