Sunday, November 26, 2006

Stress (A Tanka) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The mind and body
Bereft of its energy
Drained of synergy
Feel like a deflated tyre
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asma bahrainwala
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M Asim Nehal 23 November 2016

Excellent poem...... Well done Thanks for sharing.

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Diane Violet 09 December 2006

Yes a very accurate description of stress, this one goes very well with your 'Fatigue' poem. Well done...............All the best, Diane

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Reuben Matthew 27 November 2006

Wow! This one is amazing. Succinctly eloquent! Love, Reuben.

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R H 26 November 2006

An eloquent and accurate portrayal of stress Asma. Justine

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Joshua Fegley 26 November 2006

Awesome.....I had to look up 'bereft'......I love the word use Asma.

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