Slamming on the bed
slap marks burning red
forced down by all his weight
touches from him i hate
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This one is equaly your most amazeing and horrifying work i have read so far, it reminds me of the first chapter of 'Lovely bones'. But that ending is really a deep wound, it truely had a cut to it. Touchy subject for me personaly, but has the best final line I've read in a long time.
i really am at a loss for words. that was your best work. and like that other comment mentioned...best final line. I hope this wasn't a true story. keep it up...