Saturday, February 4, 2017

Strength Or Gentleness Comments

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Wisdom was listening in one day
(She had nothing else to do)
As strength and gentleness were debating
which was the greater of the two.
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Jim Yerman
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Glen Kappy 07 February 2017

jim, i'm reading other poems of yours after your poem of the day and came on this one. i like the last two stanzas in particular because they were a surprise. while reading i was thinking of la fontaine's fable of the north wind and the sun and was expecting an ending like it. but no, both are needed. (your characterizing wisdom as a she reminds me of proverbs chapters 8 and 9 in the bible-of which you're probably aware.) all the best to you. glen kappy

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